Your music isnt bad but imo you gotta work on trying to go "out there" some more and try putting more variety to the songs. Change up the melody a bit, maybe add some instruments. When you make something thats just a short neat little loop with low variety on how it sounds its not worth making it last all the way to 2+ minutes, let alone 8, it ends up feeling like a chore. I think you have some real potential tho and hope to see your musical work evolve!